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 <a href="https://www.ngi.eu/ngi-projects/fed4fire/">NGI Fed4Fire+</a> program.
 <br>
 The primary goal of this study was to evaluate the scalability of GNU Taler in a real-world
-scenario. That is, moving away from the loopback system to a distributed network and iden-
-tifying improvement opportunities therein to analyze and improve performance. While the
-basic framework was already known from the previous study, this work focuses on extend-
-ing the framework and making further improvements to GNU Taler. This includes, among
+scenario. That is, moving away from the loopback system to a distributed network and identifying
+improvement opportunities therein to analyze and improve performance. While the
+basic framework was already known from the previous study, this work focuses on extending
+the framework and making further improvements to GNU Taler. This includes, among
 other things, the horizontal distribution of the PostgreSQL database.
 <br>
 We identified and fixed several bottlenecks in the GNU Taler software. We parallelized the
-execution of the cryptographic frontend, leaving the PostgreSQL database as the natural bot-
-tleneck. Here, we optimized queries and modified the schema to enable table partitioning.
-The scalability demonstrated in our experiments shows that Taler is very capable of pro-
-cessing enough transactions per second to be considered an acceptable payment system.
+execution of the cryptographic frontend, leaving the PostgreSQL database as the natural bottleneck.
+Here, we optimized queries and modified the schema to enable table partitioning.
+The scalability demonstrated in our experiments shows that Taler is very capable of processing
+enough transactions per second to be considered an acceptable payment system.
 Throughout this work, we were able to increase the performance of Taler by a factor of 95,
-from about 300 to 28.5k transactions per second, showing that Central Bank Digital Curren-
-cies based on Taler would require only a few exchanges per continent.
+from about 300 to 28.5k transactions per second, showing that Central Bank Digital Currencies
+based on Taler would require only a few exchanges per continent.
 </p>
 <h4>Download links</h4>
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