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Author: Florian Dold <florian.dold@gmail.com>
Date:   Fri, 11 Sep 2020 17:38:41 +0530

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diff --git a/standards/rfc8905-in-prep.xml b/standards/rfc8905-in-prep.xml @@ -0,0 +1,857 @@ +<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?> +<!DOCTYPE rfc SYSTEM "rfc2629-xhtml.ent"> + +<rfc xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" docName="draft-dold-payto-14" + number="8905" ipr="trust200902" obsoletes="" updates="" + submissionType="independent" category="info" xml:lang="en" + tocInclude="true" symRefs="true" sortRefs="true" version="3"> + + <!-- xml2rfc v2v3 conversion 2.44.0 --> + <front> + <title abbrev="The 'payto' URI Scheme"> + The 'payto' URI Scheme for Payments + </title> + <seriesInfo name="RFC" value="8905"/> + <author fullname="Florian Dold" initials="F." surname="Dold"> + <organization>Taler Systems SA</organization> + <address> + <postal> + <street>7, rue de Mondorf</street> + <city>Erpeldange</city> + <code>5421</code> + <country>Luxembourg</country> + </postal> + <email>dold@taler.net</email> + </address> + </author> + <author fullname="Christian Grothoff" initials="C." surname="Grothoff"> + <organization>BFH</organization> + <address> + <postal> + <street>Höheweg 80</street> + <street/> + <city>Biel/Bienne</city> + <code>2501</code> + <country>Switzerland</country> + </postal> + <email>christian.grothoff@bfh.ch</email> + </address> + </author> + <date month="September" year="2020"/> + + <area>General</area> + <workgroup>Independent Stream</workgroup> + <keyword>payments</keyword> + <abstract> + <t>This document defines the 'payto' Uniform Resource Identifier (URI) + scheme for designating targets for payments.</t> + <t>A unified URI scheme for all payment target types allows applications + to offer user interactions with URIs that represent payment targets, + simplifying the introduction of new payment systems and + applications.</t> + </abstract> + </front> + <middle> + <section anchor="introduction" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Introduction</name> + <t>This document defines the 'payto' Uniform Resource Identifier (URI) + <xref target="RFC3986" format="default"/> scheme for designating + transfer form data for payments.</t> + <section numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Objective</name> + <t>A 'payto' URI always identifies the target of a payment. A 'payto' URI + consists of a payment target type, a target identifier, and optional + parameters such as an amount or a payment reference.</t> + <t>The interpretation of the target identifier is defined by the + payment target type and typically represents either a bank account or + an (unsettled) transaction.</t> + <t>A unified URI scheme for all payment target types allows + applications to offer user interactions with URIs that represent + payment targets, simplifying the introduction of new payment systems + and applications.</t> + </section> + <section numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Requirements Language</name> + <t> + The key words "<bcp14>MUST</bcp14>", "<bcp14>MUST NOT</bcp14>", + "<bcp14>REQUIRED</bcp14>", "<bcp14>SHALL</bcp14>", "<bcp14>SHALL + NOT</bcp14>", "<bcp14>SHOULD</bcp14>", "<bcp14>SHOULD NOT</bcp14>", + "<bcp14>RECOMMENDED</bcp14>", "<bcp14>NOT RECOMMENDED</bcp14>", + "<bcp14>MAY</bcp14>", and "<bcp14>OPTIONAL</bcp14>" in this document are + to be interpreted as + described in BCP&nbsp;14 <xref target="RFC2119"/> <xref target="RFC8174"/> + when, and only when, they appear in all capitals, as shown here. + </t> + </section> + </section> + <section anchor="syntax" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Syntax of a 'payto' URI</name> + <t>This document uses the Augmented Backus-Naur Form (ABNF) of <xref + target="RFC5234" format="default"/>.</t> +<sourcecode type="abnf" ><![CDATA[ + payto-URI = "payto://" authority path-abempty [ "?" opts ] + opts = opt *( "&" opt ) + opt-name = generic-opt / authority-specific-opt + opt-value = *pchar + opt = opt-name "=" opt-value + generic-opt = "amount" / "receiver-name" / "sender-name" / + "message" / "instruction" + authority-specific-opt = ALPHA *( ALPHA / DIGIT / "-" / "." ) + authority = ALPHA *( ALPHA / DIGIT / "-" / "." ) +]]></sourcecode> + <t> + 'path-abempty' is defined in <xref target="RFC3986" sectionFormat="of" section="3.3"/>. + 'pchar' is defined in <xref target="RFC3986" sectionFormat="of" section="A"/>. + </t> + </section> + <section anchor="semantics" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Semantics</name> + <t>The authority component of a payment URI identifies the payment + target type. The payment target types are defined in the "Payment + Target Types" subregistry (see <xref target="payto-registry" + format="default"/>). The path component of the URI identifies the target + for a payment as interpreted by the respective payment target type. The + query component of the URI can provide additional parameters for a + payment. Every payment target type <bcp14>SHOULD</bcp14> accept the + options defined in generic-opt. The default operation of applications + that invoke a URI with the 'payto' scheme <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> be to launch + an application (if available) associated with the payment target type + that can initiate a payment. + +<!-- [rfced] Please clarify "each accessed the respective bank's banking +application" in the parenthetical here. Is the intent "each accessed via +the respective bank's banking application" (i.e., adding "via") or something +similar? + +Original: + This allows + users with multiple bank accounts (each accessed the respective + bank's banking application) to choose which account to pay with. + +Perhaps: + This allows + users with multiple bank accounts (each accessed via the respective + bank's banking application) to choose which account to pay with. +--> + + If multiple handlers are registered for the + same payment target type, the user <bcp14>SHOULD</bcp14> be able to + choose which application to launch. This allows users with multiple bank + accounts (each accessed the respective bank's banking application) to + choose which account to pay with. An application <bcp14>SHOULD</bcp14> + allow dereferencing a 'payto' URI even if the payment target type of that + URI is not registered in the "Payment Target Types" subregistry. Details + of the payment <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> be taken from the path and options + given in the URI. The user <bcp14>SHOULD</bcp14> be allowed to modify + these details before confirming a payment.</t> + </section> + <section anchor="examples" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Examples</name> +<!-- [rfced] Please review the artwork element in the xml file. Specifically, +should this artwork element be tagged as <sourcecode>, <t>, or another +element? +--> +<artwork name="" type="" align="left" alt=""><![CDATA[ +payto://iban/DE75512108001245126199?amount=EUR:200.0&message=hello + +INVALID (authority missing): payto:iban/12345 +]]></artwork> + </section> + <section anchor="generic-options" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Generic Options</name> + <t>Applications <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> accept URIs with options in any + order. The "amount" option <bcp14>MUST NOT</bcp14> occur more than + once. Other options <bcp14>MAY</bcp14> be allowed multiple times, with + further restrictions depending on the payment target type. The following + options <bcp14>SHOULD</bcp14> be understood by every payment target + type.</t> + +<dl newline="false" spacing="normal"> + <dt>amount:</dt> + <dd><t>The amount to transfer. The format <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> be:</t> + +<sourcecode type="abnf"><![CDATA[ + amount = currency ":" unit [ "." fraction ] + currency = 1*ALPHA + unit = 1*(DIGIT / ",") + fraction = 1*(DIGIT / ",") +]]></sourcecode> + <t>If a 3-letter 'currency' is used, it <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> be an <xref + target="ISO4217" format="default"/> alphabetic code. A payment target + type <bcp14>MAY</bcp14> define semantics beyond ISO 4217 for currency + codes that are not 3 characters. The 'unit' value <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> be + smaller than 2^53. If present, the 'fraction' <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> + consist of no more than 8 decimal digits. The use of commas is optional + for readability, and they <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> be ignored.</t> </dd> + + <dt>receiver-name:</dt> + <dd>Name of the entity that receives the payment (creditor). The value of + this option <bcp14>MAY</bcp14> be subject to lossy conversion, modification, + and truncation (for example, due to line wrapping or character set + conversion).</dd> + <dt>sender-name:</dt> + <dd>Name of the entity that makes the payment (debtor). The value of this + option <bcp14>MAY</bcp14> be subject to lossy conversion, modification, and + truncation (for example, due to line wrapping or character set + conversion).</dd> + <dt>message:</dt> + <dd>A short message to identify the purpose of the payment. The value of + this option <bcp14>MAY</bcp14> be subject to lossy conversion, modification, + and truncation (for example, due to line wrapping or character set + conversion).</dd> + <dt>instruction:</dt> + <dd>A short message giving payment reconciliation instructions to the + recipient. An instruction that follows the character set and length + limitation defined by the respective payment target type <bcp14>SHOULD + NOT</bcp14> be subject to lossy conversion.</dd> + </dl> + </section> + <section anchor="encoding" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Internationalization and Character Encoding</name> + <t> + Various payment systems use restricted character sets. + An application that processes 'payto' URIs <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> convert + characters that are not allowed by the respective payment systems + into allowable characters using either an encoding or a replacement table. + This conversion process <bcp14>MAY</bcp14> be lossy, except for the instruction field. + If the value of the instruction field would be subject to lossy conversion, + modification, or truncation, + the application <bcp14>SHOULD</bcp14> refuse further processing of the payment until a + different value for the instruction is provided. +</t> + <t>To avoid special encoding rules for the payment target identifier, + the userinfo component <xref target="RFC3986" format="default"/> is + disallowed in 'payto' URIs. Instead, the payment target identifier is + given as an option, where encoding rules are uniform for all + options.</t> + <t> + Defining a generic way of tagging the language of option fields containing natural + language text (such as "receiver-name", "sender-name", and "message) + is out of the scope of this document, as internationalization must accommodate the restrictions + and requirements of the underlying banking system of the payment target type. + + The internationalization concerns <bcp14>SHOULD</bcp14> be individually defined by each payment target type. +</t> + </section> + <section anchor="tracking" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Tracking Payment Target Types</name> + <t> A registry of payment target types is described in <xref + target="payto-registry" format="default"/>. The registration policy for + this registry is "First Come First Served", as described in <xref + target="RFC8126" format="default"/>. When requesting new entries, + careful consideration of the following criteria is strongly advised:</t> + <ol spacing="normal" type="1"> + <li>The description clearly defines the syntax and semantics of the + payment target and optional parameters if applicable.</li> + <li>Relevant references are provided if they are available.</li> + <li>The chosen name is appropriate for the payment target type, does + not conflict with well-known payment systems, and avoids potential to + confuse users.</li> + <li>The payment system underlying the payment target type is not + fundamentally incompatible with the general options (such as positive + decimal amounts) in this specification.</li> + <li>The payment target type is not a vendor-specific version of a + payment target type that could be described more generally by a + vendor-neutral payment target type.</li> + <li>The specification of the new payment target type remains within + the scope of payment transfer form data. In particular, specifying + complete invoices is not in scope. Neither are processing + instructions to the payment processor or bank beyond a simple + payment.</li> + <li>The payment target and the options do not contain the payment + sender's account details.</li> + </ol> + <t>Documents that support requests for new registry entries should + provide the following information for each entry:</t> + <dl newline="false" spacing="normal"> + <dt>Name:</dt> + <dd>The name of the payment target type (case-insensitive ASCII + string, restricted to alphanumeric characters, dots, and dashes).</dd> + <dt>Description:</dt> + <dd>A description of the payment target type, including the semantics + of the path in the URI if applicable.</dd> + <dt>Example:</dt> + <dd>At least one example URI to illustrate the payment target + type.</dd> + <dt>Contact:</dt> + <dd>The contact information of a person to contact for further information.</dd> + <dt>References:</dt> + <dd>Optionally, references describing the payment target type (such as + an RFC) and target-specific options or references describing the + payment system underlying the payment target type.</dd> + </dl> + <t>This document populates the registry with seven entries as follows (see + also <xref target="payto-registry" format="default"/>).</t> + <section anchor="registry-entry-ach" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>ACH Bank Account</name> + <dl newline="false" spacing="normal"> + <dt>Name:</dt> + <dd>ach</dd> + <dt>Description:</dt> + <dd>Automated Clearing House (ACH). The path consists of two components: + the routing number and the account number. Limitations on the length + and character set of option values are defined by the implementation + of the handler. Language tagging and internationalization of options + are not supported.</dd> + <dt>Example:</dt> + <dd>payto://ach/122000661/1234</dd> + <dt>Contact:</dt> + <dd>N/A</dd> + <dt>References:</dt> + <dd><xref target="NACHA" format="default"/>, RFC 8905</dd> + </dl> + </section> + <section anchor="registry-entry-bic" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Business Identifier Code</name> + <dl newline="false" spacing="normal"> + <dt>Name:</dt> + <dd>bic</dd> + <dt>Description:</dt> + +<!-- [rfced] Would it be helpful to include a citation in this sentence? + +Original: + The registry for BICs is provided by SWIFT. +--> + + <dd>Business Identifier Code (BIC). The path consists of just + a BIC. This is used for wire transfers between banks. The registry + for BICs is provided by the Society for Worldwide Interbank + Financial Telecommunication (SWIFT). The path does not allow specifying a + bank account number. Limitations on the length and character set of + option values are defined by the implementation of the + handler. Language tagging and internationalization of options are not + supported.</dd> + <dt>Example:</dt> + <dd>payto://bic/SOGEDEFFXXX + </dd> + <dt>Contact:</dt> + <dd>N/A</dd> + <dt>References:</dt> + <dd><xref target="BIC" format="default"/>, RFC 8905</dd> + </dl> + </section> + <section anchor="registry-entry-iban" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>International Bank Account Number</name> + <dl newline="false" spacing="normal"> + <dt>Name:</dt> + <dd>iban</dd> + <dt>Description:</dt> + +<!-- [rfced] How may we clarify "allows to unambiguously derive" here? + +Original: + Generally the IBAN allows to unambiguously derive the the associated + Business Identifier Code (BIC). +--> + <dd>International Bank Account Number (IBAN). Generally, the IBAN + allows to unambiguously derive the associated Business + Identifier Code (BIC). However, some legacy applications process + payments to the same IBAN differently based on the specified BIC. + Thus, the path can consist of either a single component (the IBAN) or + two components (BIC followed by IBAN). The "message" option of the + 'payto' URI corresponds to the "unstructured remittance information" + of Single Euro Payments Area (SEPA) credit transfers and is thus + limited to 140 characters with + character set limitations that differ according to the countries of + the banks and payment processors involved in the payment. The + "instruction" option of the 'payto' URI corresponds to the "end-to-end + identifier" of SEPA credit transfers and is thus limited to, at most, + 35 characters, which can be alphanumeric or from the allowed set of + special characters, i.e., "+?/-:().,'". Language tagging and + internationalization of options are not supported.</dd> + <dt>Examples:</dt> +<dd><t>payto://iban/DE75512108001245126199</t><t>payto://iban/SOGEDEFFXXX/DE75512108001245126199</t> +</dd> + <dt>Contact:</dt> + <dd>N/A</dd> + <dt>References:</dt> + <dd><xref target="ISO20022" format="default"/>, RFC 8905</dd> + </dl> + </section> + <section anchor="registry-entry-upi" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Unified Payments Interface</name> + <dl newline="false" spacing="normal"> + <dt>Name:</dt> + <dd>upi</dd> + <dt>Description:</dt> + <dd>Unified Payment Interface (UPI). The path is an account alias. The + amount and receiver-name options are mandatory for this payment + target. Limitations on the length and character set of option values + are defined by the implementation of the handler. Language tags and + internationalization of options are not supported.</dd> + <dt>Example:</dt> + <dd>payto://upi/alice@example.com?receiver-name=Alice&amp;amount=INR:200 + </dd> + <dt>Contact:</dt> + <dd>N/A</dd> + <dt>References:</dt> + <dd><xref target="UPILinking" format="default"/>, RFC 8905</dd> + </dl> + </section> + <section anchor="registry-entry-bitcoin" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Bitcoin Address</name> + <dl newline="false" spacing="normal"> + <dt>Name:</dt> + <dd>bitcoin</dd> + <dt>Description:</dt> + <dd>Bitcoin protocol. The path is a "bitcoinaddress", as per <xref + target="BIP0021" format="default"/>. Limitations on the length and + character set of option values are defined by the implementation of + the handler. Language tags and internationalization of options are + not supported.</dd> + <dt>Example:</dt> + <dd>payto://bitcoin/12A1MyfXbW6RhdRAZEqofac5jCQQjwEPBu + </dd> + <dt>Contact:</dt> + <dd>N/A</dd> + <dt>References:</dt> + <dd><xref target="BIP0021" format="default"/>, RFC 8905</dd> + </dl> + </section> + <section anchor="registry-entry-ilp" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Interledger Protocol Address</name> + <dl newline="false" spacing="normal"> + <dt>Name:</dt> + <dd>ilp</dd> + <dt>Description:</dt> + <dd>Interledger protocol (ILP). The path is an ILP address, as per <xref + target="ILP-ADDR" format="default"/>. Limitations on the length and + character set of option values are defined by the implementation of + the handler. Language tagging and internationalization of options + are not supported.</dd> + <dt>Example:</dt> + <dd>payto://ilp/g.acme.bob + </dd> + <dt>Contact: </dt> + <dd>N/A</dd> + <dt>References:</dt> + <dd><xref target="ILP-ADDR" format="default"/>, RFC 8905</dd> + </dl> + </section> + <section anchor="registry-entry-void" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Void Payment Target</name> + <dl newline="false" spacing="normal"> + <dt>Name:</dt> + <dd>void</dd> + <dt>Description:</dt> + <dd>The "void" payment target type allows specifying the parameters + of an out-of-band payment (such as cash or other types of in-person + transactions). The path is optional and interpreted as a + comment. Limitations on the length and character set of option + values are defined by the implementation of the handler. Language + tags and internationalization of options are not supported.</dd> + <dt>Example:</dt> + <dd>payto://void/?amount=EUR:10.5 + </dd> + <dt>Contact:</dt> + <dd>N/A</dd> + <dt>References:</dt> + <dd>RFC 8905</dd> + </dl> + </section> + </section> + +<section anchor="security" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Security Considerations</name> + <t>Interactive applications handling the 'payto' URI scheme <bcp14>MUST + NOT</bcp14> initiate any financial transactions without prior review and + confirmation from the user and <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> take measures to + prevent clickjacking <xref target="HMW12" format="default"/>.</t> + <t>Unless a 'payto' URI is received over a trusted, authenticated channel, + a user might not be able to identify the target of a payment. In + particular, due to homographs <xref target="unicode-tr36" + format="default"/>, a payment target type <bcp14>SHOULD NOT</bcp14> use + human-readable names in combination with unicode in the target account + specification, as it could give the user the illusion of being able to + identify the target account from the URI.</t> + <t>The authentication/authorization mechanisms and transport security + services used to process a payment encoded in a 'payto' URI are handled by + the application and are not in scope of this document.</t> + <t>To avoid unnecessary data collection, payment target types + <bcp14>SHOULD NOT</bcp14> include personally identifying information + about the sender of a payment that is not essential for an application + to conduct a payment.</t> + </section> + <section anchor="iana" numbered="true" toc="default"> + +<!-- [rfced] We note that the IANA registry at +https://www.iana.org/assignments/uri-schemes/ includes a template that +refers to this document. Should this template appear in the document? + +Template on https://www.iana.org/assignments/uri-schemes/: + + (registered 2019-01-28, last updated 2020-05-02) + + Scheme name: payto + + Status: provisional + + URI scheme syntax: See Section 2 of RFC-dold-payto-14. + + URI scheme semantics: See Section 3 of RFC-dold-payto-14. + + Applications/protocols that use this scheme name: payto URIs are + mainly used by financial software + + Contact: grothoff&gnu.org + + Change controller: grothoff&gnu.org + + References: See References section of RFC-dold-payto-14. +--> + + <name>IANA Considerations</name> + <t> + IANA maintains the "Uniform Resource Identifier (URI) Schemes" registry, + which contains an entry for the 'payto' URI scheme. IANA has updated that + entry to reference this document. +</t> + </section> + + <section anchor="payto-registry" numbered="true" toc="default"> + <name>Payment Target Types</name> + <t> + This document specifies a list of payment target types. It is + possible that future work will need to specify additional payment + target types. The GNUnet Assigned Numbers Authority (GANA) <xref target="GANA" format="default"/> + operates the "payto-payment-target-types" registry to track + the following information for each payment target type: +</t> + <dl newline="false" spacing="normal"> + <dt>Name:</dt> + <dd>The name of the payment target type (case-insensitive ASCII + string, restricted to alphanumeric characters, dots, and dashes)</dd> + <dt>Contact:</dt> + <dd>The contact information of a person to contact for further + information</dd> + <dt>References:</dt> + <dd>Optionally, references describing the payment target type (such as + an RFC) and target-specific options or references describing the + payment system underlying the payment target type</dd> + </dl> + <t> + The entries in the "payto-payment-target-types" registry + defined in this document are as follows: +</t> +<table> + <thead> + <tr> + <th>Name</th> + <th>Contact</th> + <th>Reference</th> + </tr> + </thead> + <tbody> + <tr> + <td>ach</td> + <td>N/A</td> + <td>RFC 8905</td> + </tr> + <tr> + <td>bic</td> + <td>N/A</td> + <td>RFC 8905</td> + </tr> + <tr> + <td>iban</td> + <td>N/A</td> + <td>RFC 8905</td> + </tr> + <tr> + <td>upi</td> + <td>N/A</td> + <td>RFC 8905</td> + </tr> + <tr> + <td>bitcoin</td> + <td>N/A</td> + <td>RFC 8905</td> + </tr> + <tr> + <td>ilp</td> + <td>N/A</td> + <td>RFC 8905</td> + </tr> + <tr> + <td>void</td> + <td>N/A</td> + <td>RFC 8905</td> + </tr> + </tbody> +</table> + </section> + + +</middle> + <back> + <references> + <name>References</name> + <references> + <name>Normative References</name> + <xi:include href="https://xml2rfc.tools.ietf.org/public/rfc/bibxml/reference.RFC.2119.xml"/> + <xi:include href="https://xml2rfc.tools.ietf.org/public/rfc/bibxml/reference.RFC.3986.xml"/> + <xi:include href="https://xml2rfc.tools.ietf.org/public/rfc/bibxml/reference.RFC.5234.xml"/> + <xi:include href="https://xml2rfc.tools.ietf.org/public/rfc/bibxml/reference.RFC.8126.xml"/> + <xi:include href="https://xml2rfc.tools.ietf.org/public/rfc/bibxml/reference.RFC.8174.xml"/> + +<!--[rfced] References + +a) Please review the date and title for this reference. The latest version +that we see is dated August 2015 (rather than August 2018). Also, should the +title be "Currency Codes" or "Codes for the representation of currencies"? We +see both titles in these URLs: +https://www.iso.org/iso-4217-currency-codes.html and +https://www.iso.org/standard/64758.html. + +Original: + [ISO4217] International Organization for Standardization, "ISO 4217 + Currency Codes", August 2018. + + +c) We have updated the date of this reference from "March 2019" to "December +2014" to correspond to the date in the URL provided. Please let us know any +objections. + +Original: + [BIC] International Organization for Standardization, "ISO + 9362:2014 Business Identifier Code (BIC)", March 2019, + <https://www.iso.org/standard/60390.html>. + +Updated: + [BIC] International Organization for Standardization, "Banking - + Baking telecommunication messages - Business identifier + code (BIC)", ISO 9362, December 2014, + <https://www.iso.org/standard/60390.html>. + + +c) We note that one ISO reference entry includes a URL while two others do +not. For consistency, would you like to include URLs for all three ISO +references? (Note that ISO 20022 has a number of parts; we included the URL +for Part 1 below, but please let us know if another would be better.) + +Original: + [ISO20022] + International Organization for Standardization, "ISO 20022 + Financial Services - Universal financial industry message + scheme", May 2013. + + [ISO4217] International Organization for Standardization, "ISO 4217 + Currency Codes", August 2018. + + [BIC] International Organization for Standardization, "ISO + 9362:2014 Business Identifier Code (BIC)", March 2019, + <https://www.iso.org/standard/60390.html>. + +Perhaps: + [ISO20022] International Organization for Standardization, "Financial + Services - Universal financial industry message scheme", + ISO 20022, May 2013, <https://www.iso.org/standard/55005.html>. + + [ISO4217] International Organization for Standardization, "Currency + Codes", ISO 4217, August 2015, + <https://www.iso.org/standard/64758.html>. + + [BIC] International Organization for Standardization, "Banking - + Baking telecommunication messages - Business identifier + code (BIC)", ISO 9362, December 2014, + <https://www.iso.org/standard/60390.html>. + + +d) We note that this reference has an updated version (see +https://www.nacha.org/products/2020-nacha-operating-rules-guidelines). Would +you like to cite the more recent version? + +Original: + [NACHA] NACHA, "NACHA Operating Rules & Guidelines", January 2017. + +Perhaps: + [NACHA] Nacha, "2020 NACHA Operating Rules & Guidelines", 2019. + + +e) We see that the wiki cited in this reference was last updated in September +2019. We updated this reference entry accordingly. + +Original: + [BIP0021] Schneider, N. and M. Corallo, "Bitcoin Improvement + Proposal 21", January 2012, + <https://en.bitcoin.it/wiki/BIP_0021>. + +Perhaps: + [BIP0021] Schneider, N. and M. Corallo, "BIP 0021", September 2019, + <https://en.bitcoin.it/w/index.php?title=BIP_0021&oldid=66778>. + +--> + <reference anchor="ISO4217"> + <front> + <title>Currency Codes</title> + <author> + <organization>International Organization for Standardization</organization> + <address> + <uri>http://www.iso.ch</uri> + </address> + </author> + <date month="August" year="2018"/> + </front> + <seriesInfo name="ISO" value="4217"/> + </reference> + + <reference anchor="ISO20022"> + <front> + <title>Financial Services - Universal financial industry message scheme</title> + <author> + <organization>International Organization for Standardization</organization> + <address> + <uri>http://www.iso.ch</uri> + </address> + </author> + <date month="May" year="2013"/> + </front> + <seriesInfo name="ISO" value="20022"/> + </reference> + + <reference anchor="NACHA"> + <front> + <title>Nacha Operating Rules &amp; Guidelines</title> + <author> + <organization>Nacha</organization> + <address> + <uri>https://www.nacha.org/</uri> + </address> + </author> + <date month="January" year="2017"/> + </front> + </reference> + + <reference anchor="unicode-tr36"> + <front> + <title abbrev="Unicode Security Considerations">Unicode Technical + Report #36: Unicode Security Considerations</title> + <author initials="M." surname="Davis" fullname="Mark Davis" role="editor"> + <address> + <email>markdavis@google.com</email> + </address> + </author> + <author initials="M." surname="Suignard" fullname="Michael Suignard"> + <address> + <email>michel@suignard.com</email> + </address> + </author> + <date month="September" year="2014"/> + </front> + </reference> + </references> + + <references> + <name>Informative References</name> + + <reference anchor="BIP0021" target="https://en.bitcoin.it/w/index.php?title=BIP_0021&amp;oldid=66778"> + <front> + <title>Bitcoin Improvement Proposal 21</title> + <author initials="N." surname="Schneider" fullname="Nils Schneider"> + </author> + <author initials="M." surname="Corallo" fullname="Matt Corallo"> + </author> + <date month="September" year="2019"/> + </front> + </reference> + + <reference anchor="HMW12" target="https://www.usenix.org/system/files/conference/usenixsecurity12/sec12-final39.pdf"> + <front> + <title>Clickjacking: Attacks and Defenses</title> + <author initials="L." surname="Huang" fullname="Lin-Shung Huang"> + </author> + <author initials="A." surname="Moshchuk" fullname="Alexander Moshchuk"> + </author> + <author initials="H." surname="Wang" fullname="Helen J. Wang"> + </author> + <author initials="S." surname="Schecter" fullname="Stuart Schecter"> + </author> + <author initials="C." surname="Jackson" fullname="Collin Jackson"> + </author> + <date year="2012"/> + </front> + </reference> + + <reference anchor="UPILinking" target="https://www.npci.org.in/sites/default/files/UPI%20Linking%20Specs_ver%201.6.pdf"> + <front> + <title>Unified Payment Interface - Common URL Specifications For Deep + Linking And Proximity Integration</title> + <author> + <organization>National Payments Corporation of India</organization> + </author> + <date month="November" year="2017"/> + </front> + </reference> + + <reference anchor="ILP-ADDR" target="https://interledger.org/rfcs/0015-ilp-addresses/"> + <front> + <title>ILP Addresses - v2.0.0</title> + <author> + <organization>Interledger</organization> + </author> + </front> + </reference> + + <reference anchor="BIC" target="https://www.iso.org/standard/60390.html"> + <front> + <title>Banking - Baking telecommunication messages + - Business identifier code (BIC)</title> + <author> + <organization>International Organization for Standardization</organization> + </author> + <date month="December" year="2014"/> + </front> + <seriesInfo name="ISO" value="9362"/> + </reference> + + +<!-- [rfced] Questions about the [GANA] reference + +a) The [GANA] reference seems to be to a git repository. See +https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/ (search for "Repositories") for +information about how repositories like this are typically cited in the RFC +Series. Please let us know which title, commit hash, and date to use. In +addition, we suggest updating the URL in this reference entry to point to a +more direct URL. Would either of the following work? + +https://git.gnunet.org/gana.git/tree/payto-payment-target-types +or +https://git.gnunet.org/gana.git/tree/payto-payment-target-types/registry.rec + +Original: + [GANA] GNUnet e.V., "GNUnet Assigned Numbers Authority (GANA)", + April 2020, <https://gana.gnunet.org/>. + + +b) We see the following forms used for the title of the registry at +[GANA]. Should these be consistent? If so, please let us know which form to +use. + +"Payment Target Types" sub-registry +"payto-payment-target-types” registry +--> + + + <reference anchor="GANA" target="https://gana.gnunet.org/"> + <front> + <title>GNUnet Assigned Numbers Authority (GANA)</title> + <author> + <organization>GNUnet e.V.</organization> + </author> + <date month="April" year="2020"/> + </front> + </reference> + </references> + </references> + + +<!-- [rfced] We see the following forms in the document. We chose the form on +the right (i.e., the form with single quotes). Please let us know any +objections. + +payto vs. 'payto' +--> + +</back> +</rfc>