commit 5f97d21437a0335715fe9272eac2d5031644df30
parent c26d3cbb44f5b4c8e9fc60f2a04902d1a4beb939
Author: Christian Grothoff <christian@grothoff.org>
Date: Fri, 28 Jan 2022 18:46:21 +0100
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diff --git a/2022-privacy/privacy.tex b/2022-privacy/privacy.tex
@@ -280,11 +280,11 @@ rejection of treating every citizen as a criminal suspect by doubling down.
The missing link in the ECB proposal that would reveal the dystopic reality
they would invoke would be a statement that facial recognition could be used
to conveniently establish the payer's identity --- or ``pay with your smile'',
-as contemporary account-based digital payment offerings already put it. If
-CBDC payment data, which like other payment data can be expected to be
-retained for 6 or more years~\cite{fca}, were to be strongly coupled with our
-identities, those who dislike living in a panopticon could only hope for such
-a CBDC to be rarely used.
+as contemporary account-based digital payment offerings already put it. We
+stress that CBDC payment data, like other payment data, can be expected to be
+retained for 6 or more years~\cite{fca}. If CBDC payment data is additionally
+strongly coupled with our identities, those who dislike living in a panopticon
+could only hope for such a CBDC to be rarely used.
% FIXME This paragraph. It conflates and rambles incoherently with a lot of ()s
