commit 5497a0740cf203faee960fc71166371b4f641f2d
parent 4c3f3a4856185a32305221e608452676d0bfa904
Author: Florian Dold <florian.dold@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2015 19:19:36 +0100
script: minor fix
Diffstat:
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/presentations/pitch-ubs/pitch5m-script.txt b/presentations/pitch-ubs/pitch5m-script.txt
@@ -34,15 +34,16 @@ button on her wallet. This authorizes the payment.
She does not need to identify herself, and the wallet will not give out any
information about Sarah, it'll just authorize the spending of digital cash
-tokens stored inside the wallet.
+tokens stored inside the wallet. That's one of the things that make Taler
+different from most other digital payment systems.
# Dold: Okay, maybe too much detail,
# but it's a transition to the next part.
After using the test in the next public bathroom, she is very
relieved that it is negative.
-She's more relaxed on her way home, and when she sees a pair of earrings that
-her friend could really like, she buys them with her taler wallet.
+Sarah is more relaxed on her way home, and when she sees a pair of earrings that
+her friend could really like, she buys them with her Taler wallet.
Sarah doesn't have to worry about the receipt, if her friend doesn't like the
earrings, she can always go back and use her Taler wallet to prove to the store
