commit 062c89eb8494a59cf835fd0c7c0320f853d2a9c7
parent e51d59202aa7d8e3afcd57d7a2bc977816d0a166
Author: Jonathan <ondesmartenot@riseup.net>
Date: Thu, 23 Jan 2025 15:39:36 +0800
1.3: grammar fixes, rewording for clarification
Diffstat:
1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/intro.tex b/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/intro.tex
@@ -212,12 +212,11 @@ GNU Taler~\cite{Taler} payment system. GNU Taler is a {\em digital
cryptography. This means that -- unlike proprietary products -- anyone
can easily extend and customize the core system.
-As may be obvious from the underlying acronym "Taxable Anonymous Libre
-Electronic Resources", GNU Taler bridges two seemingly opposite
-requirements: providing privacy to citizens with regards to how they
-spend their money in the digital realm, while at the same time
-creating a system for organizations which handle financial
-transactions that is transparent and auditable. These high-level
+As the underlying acronym (``Taxable Anonymous Libre
+Electronic Resources'') suggests, GNU Taler bridges two seemingly opposing
+requirements: 1) providing privacy to citizens with regard to how they
+spend their money in the digital realm, and 2) making these expenditures (on the receiving end) transparent to and auditable by appropriate financial institutions.
+These high-level
objectives philosophically match nicely with our objective of
achieving privacy-preserving donations with tax-deductability.
