depolymerization

commit 5c3ee6b9cd5f45d36e102bb2d3ed28c2e23a6154
parent e18cd74ea134700bfd869aee541cd57c2abd3639
Author: Christian Grothoff <christian@grothoff.org>
Date:   Tue, 15 Feb 2022 20:18:06 +0100

-minor corrections

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docs/presentation.tex
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1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
diff --git a/docs/presentation.tex b/docs/presentation.tex
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 \documentclass{beamer}
- 
+
 \usepackage{tikz}
 \usepackage{ragged2e}
 
@@ -8,11 +8,11 @@
 \usetikzlibrary{positioning,fit}
 
 \title{Depolymerization}
-\subtitle{Linking Taler with blockchain based cryptocurrencies}
+\subtitle{Integrating GNU Taler with blockchain-based cryptocurrencies}
 \author{Antoine d'Aligny}
 \institute{Bern University of Applied Sciences}
 \date{\today}
-\titlegraphic{\includegraphics[width=2.5cm]{media/taler.png}} 
+\titlegraphic{\includegraphics[width=2.5cm]{media/taler.png}}
 
 \begin{document}
 
@@ -349,11 +349,11 @@
             \node [right=17mm of 6]{\emph{active}};
         \end{tikzpicture}
     \end{center}
-    \only<1>{As small reorganisations are common, Satoshi already recommend to
+    \only<1>{As small reorganisations are common, Satoshi already recommended to
         apply a confirmation delay to handle most disturbances and attacks.}
     \only<2>{If a reorganisation longer than the confirmation delay happens,
-        but it did not remove credits, depolymerizer is safe and automatically
-        resume.}
+        but it did not remove credits, Depolymerizer is safe and automatically
+        resumes.}
     \only<3>{If a fork removed a confirmed debit, an attacker may create a
         conflicting transaction. Depolymerizer suspends operation until lost
         credits reappear.}
@@ -415,8 +415,8 @@
         \end{tikzpicture}
     \end{center}
     If we experience a reorganisation once, its dangerously likely for another
-    one of the same size to happen again. Depolymerizer learns from reorganisations
-    by increasing its confirmation time.
+    one of a similar scope to happen again. Depolymerizer learns from reorganisations
+    by increasing its confirmation delay.
 \end{frame}
 
 
@@ -474,16 +474,17 @@
     \end{block}
     \begin{block}{Layering - Lightning Network}
         \begin{itemize}
-            \item [$+$] Fast and cheap: off chain transaction
-            \item [$-$] Incompatible with Bitcoin: require setting up a bidirectional payment channel
+            \item [$+$] Fast and cheap: off-chain transactions
+            \item [$-$] Requires setting up bidirectional payment channels
             \item [$-$] Fraud attempts are mitigated via a complex penalty system
         \end{itemize}
     \end{block}
 \end{frame}
 
 \begin{frame}{Conclusion}
-    Blockchain can be used a settlement layer for Taler payment system using
-    depolymerizer
+  Blockchains can be used as a settlement layer for GNU Taler
+  with Depolymerizer.
+
     \begin{itemize}
         \item [$-$] Trust exchange operator or auditors
         \item [$+$] Fast and cheap
@@ -501,4 +502,4 @@
         \item  Multisig by multiple operator for transactions validation
     \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
-\end{document}
-\ No newline at end of file
+\end{document}