depolymerization

commit e18cd74ea134700bfd869aee541cd57c2abd3639
parent 88556bdbfa2140e8d11367cf87601df0c70f0604
Author: Antoine A <>
Date:   Tue, 15 Feb 2022 19:20:23 +0100

presentation: progress

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docs/presentation.tex
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1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
diff --git a/docs/presentation.tex b/docs/presentation.tex
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@
         \end{tikzpicture}
     \end{center}
     A fork is when concurrent blockchain states coexist. Nodes will follow
-    the longest chain, replacing recent blocks if necessary. That is a
+    the longest chain, replacing recent blocks if necessary during a
     blockchain reorganisation. If a deposit transaction disappears from the
     blockchain, an irrevocable withdraw transactions would no longer be backed
     by credit.
@@ -295,8 +295,8 @@
         \end{itemize}
     \end{block}
     \begin{block}{Custom input format}
-        Use input data in transactions usually to call smart contract to
-        store metadata.
+        Use input data in transactions, usually used to call smart contract, to
+        store our metadata.
     \end{block}
 \end{frame}
 
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@
 
             % Current
             \only<1>{
-                \node [block,right=5mm of 3](4){};
+                \node [block,nconf,right=5mm of 3](4){};
             }
             \only<2->{
                 \node [block,conf,right=5mm of 3](4){\only<3>{$D_3$}};
@@ -354,7 +354,7 @@
     \only<2>{If a reorganisation longer than the confirmation delay happens,
         but it did not remove credits, depolymerizer is safe and automatically
         resume.}
-    \only<3>{If a fork removed a confirmed debit an attacker may create a
+    \only<3>{If a fork removed a confirmed debit, an attacker may create a
         conflicting transaction. Depolymerizer suspends operation until lost
         credits reappear.}
 \end{frame}
@@ -415,7 +415,7 @@
         \end{tikzpicture}
     \end{center}
     If we experience a reorganisation once, its dangerously likely for another
-    one of the same size to happen again. btc-wire learns from reorganisations
+    one of the same size to happen again. Depolymerizer learns from reorganisations
     by increasing its confirmation time.
 \end{frame}
 
@@ -424,9 +424,9 @@
 \begin{frame}{DLT Adapter}{Architecture}
     \begin{block}{Event system}
         \begin{itemize}
-            \item \textbf{Watcher} listen for new blocks
+            \item \textbf{Watcher} watch and notify for new blocks
             \item \textbf{Wire Gateway} notify requested debits
-            \item \textbf{Worker} notify state change
+            \item \textbf{Worker} notify changing function state
         \end{itemize}
     \end{block}
 \end{frame}
@@ -440,7 +440,7 @@
                     rect/.style={rectangle, draw=black, minimum height=6mm, minimum width=50mm},
                 ]
 
-                \node[rect](wo1) {Wait for notification};
+                \node[rect](wo1) {Wait for notifications};
                 \node[rect, below=4mm of wo1](wo2) {Reconcile local DB with DLT};
                 \node[rect, below=4mm of wo2](wo3) {Trigger debits};
                 \node[rect, below=4mm of wo3](wo4) {Reissue stuck debits};
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@
         \begin{block}{DLT reconcialisation}
             \begin{itemize}
                 \item List new and removed transactions since last reconciliation
-                \item Check for confirmed deposits removal
+                \item Check for confirmed credits removal
                 \item Register new credits
                 \item Recover lost debits
             \end{itemize}
@@ -483,7 +483,7 @@
 
 \begin{frame}{Conclusion}
     Blockchain can be used a settlement layer for Taler payment system using
-    depolymerizer.
+    depolymerizer
     \begin{itemize}
         \item [$-$] Trust exchange operator or auditors
         \item [$+$] Fast and cheap
@@ -496,9 +496,9 @@
 
 \begin{frame}{Future work}
     \begin{itemize}
-        \item  Universal auditability, using onchain transactions history
+        \item  Universal auditability, using sharded transactions history
         \item  Smarter analysis, update confirmation delay based on currency network behavior
-        \item  Multisig by multiple operator for debit
+        \item  Multisig by multiple operator for transactions validation
     \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
 \end{document}
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