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diff --git a/doc/paper/taler.tex b/doc/paper/taler.tex
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@@ -1301,12 +1301,12 @@ We assert that Taler is taxable on the grounds that any user who
modified their wallet to operate dishonestly could similarly modify
it to use the linking protocol to cheat other users.
-Although this claims holds broadly, one could envision violating it
+Although this claim holds broadly, one could envision violating it
with advanced forms of Digital Restrictions Management (DRM) that
exploited trusted code execution. We discount this threat as being
similar to the withdrawal loophole, but we recommend that hardware
-DRM be outlawed for posing a threat to the state's tax base, along
-with more serious concerns.
+DRM be outlawed for posing a threat to the state's tax base.
+% along with more serious concerns. %\cite RMS or EFF or ??
Assuming the user can operate their computer freely,