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diff --git a/introduction.tex b/introduction.tex
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--- a/introduction.tex
+++ b/introduction.tex
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-\chapter{Introduction}
+\chapter{Introduction}\label{chapter:introduction}
 
 The design of payment systems shapes economies and societies.  Strong,
 developed nation states have adopted highly transparent payment systems, such
@@ -22,10 +22,14 @@ Mention GDPR, data minimization
 
 blockchain + e-cash/taler as full-stack payment system that can be deployed by everybody
 
+% FIXME:  say why it's "GNU Taler", GNU project context
+
 % FIXME: demo walk-through of GNU Taler as user
 
 % FIXME:  give the whole blind sigatures as carbon paper signing analogy
 
+% FIXME: dependency graph between chapters
+
 \section{Requirement for Payment Systems}
 (Discuss different requirements, stress that payment systems are typically
 used as stacks of multiple systems, and that no one size fits all)
@@ -49,7 +53,7 @@ Or:  Why another payment system?
   \item \textbf{GNU Taler must foster competition.}
 \end{enumerate}
 
-\section{Walkthrough of a GNU Taler Payment}
+\section{Making a Payment with GNU Taler}
 
 
 \section{Features of E-Cash}
@@ -78,7 +82,7 @@ Electronic Cash with Anonymous User Suspension
 (Ecash vs off-line recovery)
 
 FIXME:  discuss ways to handle extortion / perfect crime / kidnapping
-\subsection{Fair Exchange}
+\subsection{Atomic Swaps}
 
 \section{Contributions}
 
@@ -100,3 +104,5 @@ Thesis statement: Permissioned blockchains and income-transparent e-cash can be
 
 
 \section{Roadmap}
+
+