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| author | Florian Dold <florian.dold@gmail.com> | 2019-05-05 01:32:54 +0200 |
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| committer | Florian Dold <florian.dold@gmail.com> | 2019-05-05 01:32:54 +0200 |
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diff --git a/comments.txt b/comments.txt index d3a3e34..eccce20 100644 --- a/comments.txt +++ b/comments.txt @@ -16,8 +16,8 @@ to the more abstractly described protocols of Chapter 3. It is not simply that y instantiating earlier mechanisms with concrete primitives; much more seems to be going on. Are there concrete claims being made as to the security of these constructions? + - Fix overfull hboxes -- Fix uses of "for example", e.g. and i.e. - Check notation for numbers - consistency of list capitalization - include auditor tables in 4.3 (Space usage by database table) @@ -25,7 +25,6 @@ on. Are there concrete claims being made as to the security of these constructio - Proof-read references (capitalization in titles) - transition to chapter 5? - connection of BSC to Taler (at end of Chapter?) -- update payto draft and point to URL Table 4.4: |