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author | Florian Dold <florian.dold@gmail.com> | 2016-02-17 05:01:41 +0100 |
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committer | Florian Dold <florian.dold@gmail.com> | 2016-02-17 05:01:41 +0100 |
commit | 524387973f4aae3ee4cf5813131b504b039622a9 (patch) | |
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diff --git a/example-essay-store.rst b/example-essay-store.rst index 585ca22a..1da9eb62 100644 --- a/example-essay-store.rst +++ b/example-essay-store.rst @@ -18,10 +18,10 @@ payment page. 1. The server checks the status of the the essay with the name `name` in the server-side session state - * If the essay is marked as payed for the client, display the essay. + * If the essay is marked as payed, display the essay. * Otherwise proceed with step 2 -2. The server checks if the `tid` query parameter is present +2. The server checks if the `tid` and `timestamp` query parameters are present * If `tid` and `timestamp` are present, restore the contract for the essay (using `tid` as transaction id in the contract and `timestamp` as timestamp) and emit the `taler-execute-contract` DOM @@ -35,9 +35,10 @@ payment page. In step 2, the `taler-execute-contract` event has the following parameters: * `H_contract`: hash of the contract that was restored -* `payment_url`: The internal URL `/pay?H_contract=...` of the essay store, will set the server-side session state - for the article associated with the contract hash on successful coin deposit. When the contract is - fetched, the contract hash is associated with the article name in the server-side session state. +* `payment_url`: The internal URL `/pay?H_contract=...` of the essay store, + will set the server-side session state for the article associated with the + contract hash on successful coin deposit. The contract hash is associated + with the article name in the server-side session state when the contract is restored. * `offer_url`: Link to a teaser page (`/teaser?name=...`), which also contains a link to the article page, without the `tid` parameter. |