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       <!-- {# <div class="col col-md-auto"></div> #} project intro -->
       <div class="col-md-11 col-md-4 mb-4 px-md-4">
         <p class="w-responsive mx-auto mb-3">
-          GNU Taler (<em>Taxable Anonymous Libre Electronic Resources</em>) 
-          is a new secure electronic payment system based on open standards, free software, and world class cryptography.
-          <br>The TALER consortium aims to make GNU Taler available to the European public as a 
-          commercial payment system. GNU Taler provides privacy guarantees to the buyer, and auditing capacity to tax authorities, 
-          making sales transparent and fraud difficult. To online merchants and retailers, GNU Taler lowers transaction costs significantly 
-          compared to existing payment systems as well as it supports immediate transaction clearance. Consumers can withdraw money from 
-          their existing bank account into their GNU Taler wallet, detaching their spending habits from scrutiny, in the way cash does.
+          GNU Taler (<em>Taxable Anonymous Libre Electronic Resources</em>) is a new secure 
+          electronic payment system based on open standards, free software, and advanced cryptography.
+          GNU Taler provides privacy guarantees to the buyer while offering the possibility 
+          to audit merchants, making sale profits transparent and fraud difficult. 
+          To online merchants and retailers, GNU Taler offers instant transaction clearance 
+          without risks of fake payment methods. Computations needed to clear the payments 
+          are efficient and scalable so that banks can pass on lower transaction costs to 
+          consumers and merchants. Consumers can withdraw money from their existing bank account 
+          into their GNU Taler wallet, detaching their spending habits from scrutiny, in the way cash does.
         </p>
         <p class="w-responsive mx-auto mb-3">
           The NGI TALER project is funded under Horizon Europe (Pilots for the Next Generation Internet) with the aim of bringing GNU Taler to market across Europe.