commit 524387973f4aae3ee4cf5813131b504b039622a9
parent 3ec1729010fa03051f303d957297d7d7e0b03eba
Author: Florian Dold <florian.dold@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 17 Feb 2016 05:01:41 +0100
grammar/precision
Diffstat:
1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
diff --git a/example-essay-store.rst b/example-essay-store.rst
@@ -18,10 +18,10 @@ payment page.
1. The server checks the status of the the essay with the name `name` in the server-side
session state
- * If the essay is marked as payed for the client, display the essay.
+ * If the essay is marked as payed, display the essay.
* Otherwise proceed with step 2
-2. The server checks if the `tid` query parameter is present
+2. The server checks if the `tid` and `timestamp` query parameters are present
* If `tid` and `timestamp` are present, restore the contract for the essay (using `tid` as
transaction id in the contract and `timestamp` as timestamp) and emit the `taler-execute-contract` DOM
@@ -35,9 +35,10 @@ payment page.
In step 2, the `taler-execute-contract` event has the following parameters:
* `H_contract`: hash of the contract that was restored
-* `payment_url`: The internal URL `/pay?H_contract=...` of the essay store, will set the server-side session state
- for the article associated with the contract hash on successful coin deposit. When the contract is
- fetched, the contract hash is associated with the article name in the server-side session state.
+* `payment_url`: The internal URL `/pay?H_contract=...` of the essay store,
+ will set the server-side session state for the article associated with the
+ contract hash on successful coin deposit. The contract hash is associated
+ with the article name in the server-side session state when the contract is restored.
* `offer_url`: Link to a teaser page (`/teaser?name=...`), which also contains a link to the article
page, without the `tid` parameter.
