commit f0edd3c79426445d4cfb93e43353050590e15870
parent 7df4b8510ac266abedbbde3ed6160f0f52a8009c
Author: Jonathan <ondesmartenot@riseup.net>
Date: Thu, 23 Jan 2025 16:39:21 +0800
chapter 2: add comma, parsimonious rewording
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1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/requirements.tex b/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/requirements.tex
@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@ ecosystem in the full knowledge that this will need to be updated.
In particular, this section should not be misunderstood as an overview of
current legal requirements across the world on how taxation on donations work.
-Taxation is predictably unpopular despite its clear essential function in how
-modern societies work, and therefore a very political topic that makes both
+Taxation is predictably unpopular, despite its clear essential function in
+modern society, and therefore a very political topic that makes both
fiscal legislation and the way it is interpreted subject to frequent change and
much variation. Just like taxation on labor and profits, on property, on
inheritance, on income from investment or gambling, or on consumption of
