donau

commit c6863c0967386c957ba088b561a809725615fc64
parent c0eff53990745e3afba0a112c108e61500c74a2e
Author: Jonathan <ondesmartenot@riseup.net>
Date:   Wed, 22 Jan 2025 01:13:47 +0800

3.2: minor edits

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doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/technicaldesign.tex
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diff --git a/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/technicaldesign.tex b/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/technicaldesign.tex
@@ -106,8 +106,9 @@ some cryptographic background followed by the setup and usage.
 
 \subsection{Key generation and initial setup}\label{key_generation_and_initial_setup}
 
-Before incognito donations to charities can be executed, all parties (Donau,
-charities, and donors) must perform an initial setup.
+Before incognito donations to charities can be executed, all participants in
+the donation system (i.e., the Donau, charities, and donors) must perform some
+initial setup steps.
 
 \subsubsection{Donau key generation}\label{donau_key_generation}
 \begin{enumerate}
@@ -132,12 +133,12 @@ $C^{\pub}$ is registered in the Donau database.
 \end{enumerate}
 
 \subsubsection{Donor Identifier generation}
-Each donor generates a personal \textbf{Donor Identifier} by computing a
-salted hash of their taxpayer ID.
-They use this Donor Identifier value for each donation they make and later to
-receive a donation receipt from the Donau.
+Each donor generates a personal \textbf{Donor Identifier} by computing a salted
+hash of their taxpayer ID.
+A donor uses their Donor Identifier every time they
+make a donation and again when requesting a donation receipt from the Donau.
 
-The donor computes their Donor Identifier $\DI$ as
+The donor computes their Donor Identifier $\DI$ as the hash
 \begin{align*}
   \DI = H(\texttt{TAXID}, S)
 \end{align*}