commit af4a36faecd7037906888f1b982426847cd7d1e7
parent 1b36245f974cd058d6b48b506b24d98810016ace
Author: Jonathan <ondesmartenot@riseup.net>
Date: Mon, 20 Jan 2025 22:34:56 +0800
slight rewording for clarity, add commas around sentence adverb
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1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/intro.tex b/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/intro.tex
@@ -9,9 +9,9 @@ receive a tax benefit for that donation, while at the same time preventing fraud
Donating is an important way for people to empower causes they believe in and
facilitate collective action. In many countries there is explicit state
recognition of the wider public benefit of enabling such generosity: a friendly
-tax treatment of donations. It makes sense as well: money you immediately give
-away to a recognized good cause which is administered independently is not
-income that will be converted by you into private consumption. So conceptually
+tax treatment of donations. This makes financial sense as well: money immediately given
+away to a recognized, independently administered good cause is not
+income that will be used for private consumption. So, conceptually,
it deserves a different tax treatment.
Donations can serve many causes, but quite often they are an obvious expression
