commit 3825f952079596303f0ba6708288ec4a194c540c
parent 1588457309a49a0bdbe429de59ec1e9cdeb46a6d
Author: Jonathan <ondesmartenot@riseup.net>
Date: Mon, 20 Jan 2025 22:27:40 +0800
small wording change and fix runon sentence
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diff --git a/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/intro.tex b/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/intro.tex
@@ -2,10 +2,9 @@
This paper presents the design and implementation of a protocol for
donation handling that satisfies a broad range of potential technical
-requirements and desiderata for donation systems. The system enables
+requirements and desiderata for donation systems. The protocol enables
donors to make incognito donations to registered charities and still
-receive a tax benefit from the tax authorities when filing their tax
-statement while preventing fraud.
+receive a tax benefit for that donation, while at the same time preventing fraud.
Donating is an important way for people to empower causes they believe in, and
facilitate collective action. In many countries, there is explicit state
