commit c09bf3446302107d22118fd80aca0a6fd76bdd0f
parent d76195f4037b64af0a9f7694acadebdbcec1b7ac
Author: Christian Grothoff <grothoff@gnunet.org>
Date: Sun, 20 Aug 2023 18:25:49 +0200
improve English
Diffstat:
1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml b/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml
@@ -1379,7 +1379,7 @@ BEGIN
The block is cached in the routing table until it expires,
the peer is removed from the routing table, or the information is replaced by another message
from the peer.
- The implementation <bcp14>SHOULD</bcp14> instruct the Underlay to connect to all now available addresses
+ The implementation <bcp14>SHOULD</bcp14> instruct the underlay to connect to all now available addresses
using <tt>TRY_CONNECT</tt> in order to make the underlay aware of alternative addresses for this connection and
to maintain optimal connectivity.
</li>
@@ -1603,8 +1603,8 @@ BEGIN
not already full the peer <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> try to establish a
connection to the peer indicated in the <tt>HELLO</tt> block using
the address information
- from the <tt>HELLO</tt> block and the Underlay function <tt>TRY_CONNECT</tt>.
- The implementation <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> instruct the Underlay to try to connect to all
+ from the <tt>HELLO</tt> block and the underlay function <tt>TRY_CONNECT</tt>.
+ The implementation <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> instruct the underlay to try to connect to all
provided addresses using <tt>TRY_CONNECT</tt> in order to make the underlay aware of
multiple addresses for this connection.
When a connection is established, the signal <tt>PEER_CONNECTED</tt> will cause
@@ -2070,8 +2070,8 @@ BEGIN
because the routing table or the respective k-bucket is already full.
If the peer is a suitable candidate for insertion, the local peer <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> try to establish a connection
to the peer indicated in the <tt>HELLO</tt> block using the address information
- from the <tt>HELLO</tt> block and the Underlay function <tt>TRY_CONNECT</tt>.
- The implementation <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> instruct the Underlay to connect to all provided addresses
+ from the <tt>HELLO</tt> block and the underlay function <tt>TRY_CONNECT</tt>.
+ The implementation <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> instruct the underlay to connect to all provided addresses
using <tt>TRY_CONNECT</tt> in order to make the underlay aware of multiple addresses for this connection.
When a connection is established, the signal <tt>PEER_CONNECTED</tt> will cause
the peer to be added to the respective k-bucket of the routing table (<xref target="routing"/>).
@@ -3112,7 +3112,7 @@ maybe generate proper test vector.
here is underspecified and just used as a simple example.
In practice, the key (addr-name)
refers to a scheme supported by a
- DHT Underlay.
+ DHT underlay.
</t>
<t>
The general syntax of <tt>HELLO</tt> URLs specified using
